SCENARIO: A 58-year-old man with diabetes-related end-stage renal disease on hemodialysis three times weekly presents for a goals-of-care discussion after a third hospitalization in two months for fluid overload. His wife and adult son are at bedside. He has been increasingly withdrawn, missing dialysis sessions, and telling the nursing staff he is 'done with all this.' His son insists on continuing aggressive treatment.
Before You Read
What to Look For
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Clinical Distance vs. Emotional Proximity: The SOAP note scores depression at 18 and unlocks a treatment algorithm; the prose shows you Gerald's hands 'palms up... open and empty' and lets the body speak the severity the instrument can only number.
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The Convenient Deferral: The plan calls the waiting period 'typically 4-6 wk trial' — clinical prudence. The prose confesses it is 'a kind of bargain I am making with time,' an admission that deferral serves the physician's discomfort as much as the patient's welfare.
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Who Holds the Room: Gerald's wife closes the prose with her 'terrible clarity,' yet the SOAP note mentions her once, as a corroborating historian. The poem gives her the final image — snow that 'covers everything / and changes nothing underneath.' Three forms, three answers to who the witness is.
Lens I
SOAP Note (EHR)
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SUBJECTIVE:
'I'm tired of being stuck with needles.' Describes poor appetite, sleeping 14-16 hours a day, says he no longer enjoys watching baseball. Wife confirms he has been increasingly withdrawn over the past 6 weeks. Son present, visibly upset: 'He's not thinking clearly.' When asked about thoughts of self-harm, says no, but adds he 'wouldn't mind if it was over.' Has missed 3 of his last 9 dialysis sessions.
OBJECTIVE:
VS: T 36.8, HR 88, BP 168/94, RR 18, SpO2 95% RA. Wt 84.2 kg (dry wt 78 kg). JVP elevated to 10 cm. Bilateral LE edema 2+. AV fistula L forearm with good thrill and bruit. Labs: BUN 78, Cr 9.2, K 5.6, bicarb 18, Hgb 9.1, albumin 2.8. PHQ-9 score 18 (severe depression).
ASSESSMENT:
58-year-old man with diabetes-related ESRD on hemodialysis, presenting for goals-of-care discussion after third hospitalization in 2 months for fluid overload. 1. ESRD on HD with recurrent volume overload 2/2 nonadherence, likely related to treatment fatigue and concurrent MDD. 2. Severe depression per PHQ-9 - undertreated, contributing to poor HD adherence. 3. Goals-of-care conflict between pt and family. 4. Hyperkalemia, volume overload - will need HD today regardless of broader goals discussion.
PLAN:
1. Emergent HD today for hyperkalemia and volume overload - pt consents. 2. Palliative care consult for goals-of-care facilitation and symptom management. 3. Psychiatry consult for MDD evaluation and treatment - discussed with pt that depression may be coloring his perspective, and that we owe it to him to treat it before making irreversible decisions. Pt agreeable. 4. Social work consult for family meeting. 5. Discussed with son separately that pt has decision-making capacity and that our role is to support his father's values. 6. Will reassess goals after depression treatment initiated - typically 4-6 wk trial. Documented capacity assessment in chart. 7. Continued enalapril 10 mg BID, sevelamer 800 mg TID with meals, EPO 4000 units with HD.
Lens II
Narrative Medicine: Prose
ESRD and the Decision to Stop Treatment
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There is a specific silence that fills a room when a man says he is done, and the people who love him refuse to hear it. I watch it settle now between Gerald and his son, who stands at the foot of the bed with his arms crossed like a sentry. The fistula hums under its dressing. Gerald's hands rest on the blanket, palms up, and I notice the calluses there, the hands of a man who built things, now open and empty.
I have had this conversation perhaps two hundred times and I am never ready for the moment when the family turns to me for an answer I cannot give. The son asks me to tell his father he's being irrational. What I want to say is that his father is the most rational person in this room. What I actually say is that we need to treat the depression first, and this is true, but it is also a kind of bargain I am making with time. I am asking Gerald to endure four more weeks of the needles he hates, on the chance that the world might look different through a treated brain. He agrees to this, which tells me something the son cannot see: that his father is not choosing death. He is asking us to make his life worth the pain of continuing it.
Gerald's wife has said almost nothing. She sits in the chair by the window and watches her husband's face with an expression I recognize from years of doing this work: the terrible clarity of someone who has already understood what the rest of us are still negotiating.
Lens III
Narrative Medicine: Poetry
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The fistula hums its one low note
beneath the gauze, beneath the skin
he built a deck with these hands
last summer or the one before
I say the word capacity
as if it were a thing that I could measure
like the fluid in his lungs
like the silence in his son's clenched jaw
his wife sits by the window
watching snow collect
on the parking garage
the way it covers everything
and changes nothing underneath